1) Slide 2: Please include the name of the track and the artist.
2) Slide 2: Delete target audience and keep for question 3
3) Slide 3: Change heading to GENRE and say how you used elements of the genre and so on. Last paragraph explain how you used cultural signifiers (try to use media terminology).
4) Slide 4: Heading needs changing: Replace present heading and instead head up this slide “Narrative Structure” then use sub headings: Continuity editing, ….. Montage…… Colour alteration and so on. You write well about this but heading re narrative needs to start on this slide.
5) Slide 6: When discussing split frame begin by clearly saying how and why you challenged the conventions of the “tyranny of the frame” ..then continue with your discussion. (Remember to keep question in mind all the time)
6) Slide 6: Quote Strauss accurately : Claude Levi Strauss claims that “the constant creation of conflict/opposition drives narrative” thus increasing appeal and visual pleasure.
7) Slide 7: Second paragraph: Heading INTERTEXTUALITY an aspect of the language of music videos (Goodwin). Then continue with your discussion.
Organisation is important. Thoughtful and intelligent and indicates proficient understanding of conventions of music videos.
1) Slide 2: Please include the name of the track and the artist.
ReplyDelete2) Slide 2: Delete target audience and keep for question 3
3) Slide 3: Change heading to GENRE and say how you used elements of the genre and so on. Last paragraph explain how you used cultural signifiers (try to use media terminology).
4) Slide 4: Heading needs changing: Replace present heading and instead head up this slide “Narrative Structure” then use sub headings: Continuity editing, ….. Montage…… Colour alteration and so on. You write well about this but heading re narrative needs to start on this slide.
5) Slide 6: When discussing split frame begin by clearly saying how and why you challenged the conventions of the “tyranny of the frame” ..then continue with your discussion. (Remember to keep question in mind all the time)
6) Slide 6: Quote Strauss accurately : Claude Levi Strauss claims that “the constant creation of conflict/opposition drives narrative” thus increasing appeal and visual pleasure.
7) Slide 7: Second paragraph: Heading INTERTEXTUALITY an aspect of the language of music videos (Goodwin). Then continue with your discussion.
Organisation is important. Thoughtful and intelligent and indicates proficient understanding of conventions of music videos.